MARYVILLE UNIVERSITY COURSE SYLLABUS
calendar
script format
criteria for letter grades
late work policy
class attendance policy
plagiarism policy
assignments as
percentage of course grade
assignment chart
assignment details
sample non-substantive/substantive comments on play production(s)
links to st louis theatre sites
SEMESTER/YEAR: Spring 2007
COURSE: FPAR 205H.H1
TITLE: WRITING AND PERFORMING THE 10-MINUTE PLAY
PREREQUISITE: HONORS STATUS COREQUISITES: NONE
CREDITS: 4
MEETING DAYS/TIME: Monday Wednesday 3:05-4:20p
MEETING PLACE: Reid 3323
INSTRUCTOR: Leah Schwartz, Ph.D., Professor of English
OFFICE PHONE: 314-529-9409
OFFICE LOCATION: ABAC 3206
VOICEMAIL: 314-529-9201 + 9409# E-MAIL:
lschwartz@maryville.edu
WEBSITE:
http://accweb.itr.maryville.edu/schwartz
FAX: 314-529-9965 (College of Arts and
Sciences)
OFFICE HOURS 07/sp MW 1:40-3p, T 10a-1:30p, Th
appointment
CLASS SCHEDULE 07/sp
MW 12:15-1:30p SPCH 110.01 Mouton 21
MW 3:05-4:20p FPAR 205H.H1 Reid 3323
TTh 1:40-2:55p FPAR 210.01 AUD 1423
Th 3:30-5:30p EDUC 579 Education Conference Room
Th 6p ENGL/HUM 360 AUD 1420 and other locations 15
Mar-3 May
CATALOG DESCRIPTION
A seminar course for students in the Bascom Honors
Program which reaches an understanding of art from the perspective of those
who make it. The seminar requires both individual and collaborative work.
Students write play scripts and perform those plays.
CORE OBJECTIVES
- to understand and to use the principles of playwriting
- to develop performance skills
COURSE CONTENT/TOPICS
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understanding playwriting theory
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creating situation
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writing dialogue
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handling exposition, conflict, resolution, and character development
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evaluating plays
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rewriting plays
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creativity
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acting performance
ASSESSMENT
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writing and revising 10-minute plays that work well in performance
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constructive participation in workshopping
student plays
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attending and evaluating live play performance(s)
- creation of a character
and ensemble acting in the 10-minute play productions
TEXT
Perfect 10: Writing and Producing the 10-Minute Play
Gary Garrison; Heinemann, 2001, ISBN 0-325-00312-2-51495
THIS SYLLABUS MAY BE ALTERED BY THE TEACHER TO MEET STUDENT OR
INSTRUCTIONAL NEEDS.
CALENDAR
Assignment: Sometime during the semester, view at least one
live play production and write a 3-page essay or 15 substantive comments on
the playwriting (language, dialogue, leitmotifs, plot, characterization,
exposition, conflict, resolution, special effects, style, wit, humor)
and aspects of production. Type your work.
It is due Mon 30 Apr or earlier. Hand in ticket(s) and program(s) with your
written work.
See “Links to St. Louis Theatre Sites” at the end of this syllabus to search
for plays.
17 Jan
Reading 10-minute play scripts
Discussion of exposition, conflict, resolution, character, language,
silence in the play scripts
Discussion of impetus for the play: character, situation, plot
Brainstorming to invent situations for plays, practice writing dialogue
Improvisation exercises
22 Jan
Assignment due: Read the text Perfect 10: Writing and
Producing the 10-Minute Play
Discussion of Perfect 10: Writing and Producing the 10-Minute Play
Assignment due: Record and transcribe 10 minutes of overheard dialogue.
Read it to the class. Discuss how you might use it, edit it; discus any ideas
for plays it suggests.
24 Jan
Assignment due: Sample 3 10-minute plays. Take notes about
what you think is good, isn’t good, would work, wouldn’t work. Discuss your
findings in class.
Brainstorming to invent situations; evaluating the situations
Practice writing dialogue
29,31 Jan
Assignment due: #1 10-minute play. Type the play. Bring
copies for each person in the class.
For examples of plays written by students in this course, go to
http://accweb.itr.maryville.edu/schwartz/10-minute%20play%20scripts.htm
Script format
Center the play title and your name.
List the characters and describe them briefly.
Describe the setting and situation briefly.
In the dialogue:
- Use Bold type for character names when you are designating that
character’s lines.
- Use italic type for any stage directions within the text of the play,
and put the stage directions in parentheses if they occur within a character’s
line.
- Double space between units of dialogue (each character’s line).
- Number all pages.
5,7,12,14,19,21,26 Feb
Workshopping, revising, rehearsing, performing a
selection of the first set of 10-minute plays
21 Feb Dress rehearsal, University Auditorium
26 Feb Performance, University Auditorium
12 Mar
Evaluate the play performances.
Assignment due: Bring to class news clips (from newspaper,
magazine, Internet) that suggest characters in conflict. Discuss how the
words, characters, situation, or conflict might fuel an idea for a play.
Practice writing dialogue
14,19 Mar
Assignment due the 2nd 10-minute play. Type
the play. Bring copies for each person in the class.
21 Mar
Writing workshop
26,28 Mar
Assignment due: the 3rd 10-minute play. Type the
play. Bring copies for each person in the class.
2,4,9,11,16,18,23,25 Apr
Revising, rehearsing, and performing a selection from the second and third
sets of 10-minute plays
23 Apr Dress rehearsal, University Auditorium
25 Apr Performance, University Auditorium
30 Apr
Assignment due: The 3-page essay or 15
substantive comments on at least one live play production.
2 May
Assignment due: Hand in your body of work: the
workshopped version of all 3 plays and the revised
version of 2 of the plays, clearly identified.
CRITERIA FOR
LETTER GRADES
The evaluation of each class assignment or listed
portion of the course work will be specified by a letter grade. The
letter grades indicate a judgment of the quality of the completed assignment.
The letter grades used and their values are listed in the Maryville catalogue.
The highest grade “A,” for instance, marks work of
exceptional quality which shows understanding of the assignment, the topic,
the medium, the context, the background; which shows evidence of a thoughtful
organization of ideas, drawing of relationships between ideas, presenting of
concrete supporting evidence and discussion to illustrate ideas, knowledge of
the appropriate broader context of the ideas; which uses effective and
appropriate presentation techniques; which uses effective and appropriate
standard language; which shows insight, inventiveness, creativity; which shows
sensitivity to the current state of knowledge and information about the topic
and contributes to the advancement of knowledge and understanding of the
topic.
The other grades mark work showing lesser levels of
mastery in the areas listed above. “B” work is superior, shows some
exceptional quality but not in all areas listed. “C” work is average,
may have some exceptional qualities and some deficiencies. “D” work is
of insufficient quality in some of the areas listed and has little redeeming
quality in those areas. “F” work is insufficient in more areas and has
no sufficient redeeming quality.
LATE,
INCOMPLETE, MISSING WORK
Late or incomplete work will be graded lower
than work that is complete and on time. Missing work will cause a minus
grade for that portion of the course work (not zero percent, but minus
whatever percentage is assigned to that item).
CLASS ATTENDANCE POLICY
Students are expected to attend, completely, all class meetings.
Workshopping and rehearsing can’t be effective if
some participants are missing. Non-participation in the class work will
adversely affect the student’s course grade and may result in a grade of “F”
for the course.
PLAGIARISM POLICY
(ZERO TOLERANCE)
ANY INSTANCE OF PLAGIARISM WILL RESULT IN A COURSE GRADE OF F.
All instances of plagiarism will be reported to the School dean, who forwards
that information to appropriate University administrators.
ASSIGNMENTS AND
PROPORTION OF COURSE GRADE
- Portfolio of 3 10-minute plays, 2 of them
revised 50%
- Acting in the 2 10-minute play performances 20%
- 15 comments on playwriting based on a live performance
or performances 10%
- Participation in workshopping
and other class activities 20%
ASSIGNMENT CHART
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Reading due |
Writing due |
Class work |
Performances |
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17 Jan |
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Ground work |
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22 Jan |
Perfect 10 |
10 min of overheard dialogue |
Discuss Perfect 10 & dialogue |
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24 Jan |
3 10-min plays |
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Discuss plays, practice dialog writing |
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29,31 Jan |
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#1 10-min play |
Workshop plays |
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5,7,12,14,19 Feb |
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Workshop, revise, rehearse |
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21 Feb |
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Dress rehearsal |
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26 Feb |
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#1 Performance |
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12 Mar |
News clips suggesting character or conflict |
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Evaluate play performances, discuss news clips |
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14,19 Mar |
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#2 10-min play |
Workshop plays |
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21 Mar |
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Writing workshop |
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26,28 Mar |
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#3 10-min play |
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2,4,11,16,18 Apr |
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Workshop, revise, rehearse |
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23 Apr |
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Dress rehearsal |
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25 Apr |
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#2 Performance |
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30 Apr |
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3-p essay or 15 comments on live play production |
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2 May |
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Portfolio of 3 plays, 2 revised |
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Grading of the
assignments is based on fulfillment of the course objectives. Here,
for each assignment, are additional details:
- The plays – effectiveness of
dialogue
plot
action
characterization
exposition
conflict
resolution
language
feasibility of staging
ideas
wit, humor
et cetera!
- Acting
willingness to experiment
concentration
credibility
appropriateness
effectiveness
- Participation in workshopping
and other class activities
frank, thoughtful, helpful suggestions to the playwrights
allowing other students to participate; not dominating the discussion
offering suggestions about class activities
taking part in class activities with spirit helpful to the group
- 3-page essay or 15 substantive comments on the
playwriting (language, dialogue, leitmotifs, plot, characterization,
exposition, conflict, resolution, special effects, style, wit, humor) and
aspects of production of at least one live play performance.
The assignment must be typed.
Hand in ticket and program with your written work.
It is due 30 Apr or earlier.
See “Links to St. Louis Theatre Sites” at the end of this syllabus.
See the examples of inappropriate and appropriate comments below.
Here are examples of non-substantive comments on a play production
The set was good.
The costumes were good. The directing was
good.
The theme was interesting. The set used red.
The costumes were pretty.
The theme was pride.
I hated the theatre seats.
I liked the jokes.
And here are examples of substantive comments
- The playwright Harold Jacobs must have intimate
knowledge of a troubled childhood. Both main characters, Trish and
Lily, show evidence in their treatment of their own broods that they learned
cruelty early and are determined to pass it on. The only optimistic
character in the play, Uncle Henry, counters only feebly the play’s dominant
theme: a dysfunctional family is the best perpetuator of evil yet
invented.
- The costumes in Henry Loses reinforce the
play’s theme: that cruelty is contagious. The cast wore
uniformly dull clothing: khakis for Tom and Winky,
with worn and faded T-shirts or threadbare jackets; dowdy polyester dresses
for Trish and Lily. Only with Uncle Henry did the costumer temper the
earth tones with a splash of color: his green string tie, the old red
Cardinals cap he wore even indoors. And Henry, appropriately, is also
the only character to offer a spot of hope or vitality to his young nephews.
- What was the director thinking to have a glass filled
with brown liquid sitting near the edge of an end table during the entire
production?? Nobody drank from it, nobody acknowledged it,
nobody moved it. All the characters passed
close to it several times, and during the fight scenes I was sure it was
going to be knocked over. If a script calls for a gun to appear in Act
1, somebody has to get shot before the play ends. If a director puts
something attention-getting on stage, it should be used. Otherwise,
cut it!! Don’t waste my worry!!
- Special effects should be special, and those in the
Rep’s production of Stars Above certainly were. The clouds
projected on the backdrop moved slowly across the stage, a beautiful natural
background for the stark black, white, and gray costumes of the large cast.
Appropriately, as the blue and white morphed into the reds of sunset and the
overall level of light dimmed, the formerly warring families were
silhouetted against a peaceful, gorgeous sky. The quarrel was over;
peace was at hand: the technical support in this production certainly
reinforced the action in the script.
- Black box theatre should be experimental, adventurous.
The student actors in Faraway Hills weren’t particularly suited for
the roles of elderly brothers (too energetic, make-up lines on their faces
rather than wrinkles), but the director made up for the shortcomings by
using various levels on stage, using lights creatively (stark spotlights for
the monologues); and seating the audience on all four sides of the small
stage to let us feel as if we were in the middle of the carnival on stage.
- Olivia’s diction was impeccable. I could distinguish
every word. While what she said was always clear, she was also always true
to character. Every word seemed to be a window to her emotions. I never
dreamed any voice could put such variety and such suffering into a simple
“No, no, no.”
- Adam sat on the sofa upright; he sat sideways; he
draped himself over the back and the seat with his head on the floor. His
body was physical manifestation of his indecision and torment. He was such a
whipping snake of thwarted hope that the audience couldn’t stop laughing—and
couldn’t stop hoping he would come back on stage again and do it some more.
- The lovers’ quarrel in Act 2 was the best scene in the
play. They built and built until I thought they could go no higher, when
they would suddenly drop back and make me believe that was logical—only to
adopt an icy intensity that was even more threatening than their earlier
noise. Neither one was ever alone in the scene. They fed off each other and
made me think they meant it all—and that they were experiencing it for the
first time.
- Mamet’s characters talk
and talk yet say nothing. Glengarry Glen Ross is a perfect example of
people’s ability to overuse communication without once touching the other.
Mamet’s talkiness
has the same message as Harold Pinter’s silences: that we may be social
creatures but we live each in our own void.
- Seeing Front Page was a real treat because of
the huge cast of characters. Contemporary plays avoid large casts because
that almost assures the plays will never be professionally produced because
of the expense. To see minor characters take stage for just a moment—and
then have a dozen others do the same in their turn—was to find a delight in
variety of character, voice, mannerism, that no 2-character play can match.
LINKS TO
ST. LOUIS THEATRE SITES
URL with links to most St. Louis theatre sites
http://www.kdhx.org/calendar_events/arts_calendar.htm#Theater
KDHX listing of current productions w/ length of their run
Great source of current information; links to sites of
companies with current shows; reviews
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Individual theatre sites for professional companies
http://edisontheatre.wustl.edu/
Edison Theatre – lists the Ovations schedule but not the Wash U. Performing
Arts productions
http://www.fabulousfox.com/
Fox Theatre
http://www.repstl.org/
Repertory Theatre of St. Louis (“The Rep”)
http://www.stlouisblackrep.com/
Saint Louis Black Repertory Company; does mostly plays by African-American
authors but also mounts other shows
Smaller professional companies
http://www.geocities.com/artlofttheatre/
ArtLoft – has links to New Line Theatre, HotCity
Theatre, Magic Smoking Monkey Theatre, Washington Avenue Players Project
http://www.blackcattheatre.org/
Black Cat Theatre – new theatre in Maplewood
http://www.cocastl.org/
COCA site; lists stage offerings
http://www.hotcitytheatre.org/
Hotcity Theatre – formerly City Theatre and
HotHouse Theatre; in the ArtLoft Theatre
1529 Washington
http://www.hydewaretheatre.com/links.html
Hydeware Theatre; performs at Soulard
Theatre, 1921 Ninth Street, and at other venues
http://www.geocities.com/newlinetheatre/
New Line Theatre; does mostly plays about gender issues but also mounts other
shows; performs at ArtLoft 1529 Washington
http://www.spotlighttheatrestlonline.org/
Spotlight Theatre; performs at various venues
http://www.straydogtheatre.org/
Stray Dog Theatre; performs at Clayton High School
http://www.uppityco.com/
That Uppity Theatre Company; espouses causes; cooperates w/ COCA on women’s
series at COCA
Educational theatre sites
http://www.webster.edu/depts/finearts/theatre/
Webster University Conservatory of Theatre
http://www.slu.edu/departments/utheatre/
St. Louis University Theatre
http://artsci.wustl.edu/~pad/
Washington University Performing Arts Department
Some St.
Louis theatre phone numbers
Edison Theatre, Washington University 314-935-6543
Fox Theatre 314-534-1678
HotCity
314-289-4060; 314-289-4063 (box office)
Hydeware 314-368-7306
Kirkwood Theatre Guild 314-821-9956
New Line Theatre 314-773-6526
Repertory Theatre of St. Louis 314-968-4925
Saint Louis University 314-977-2998
St. Louis Black Repertory Company 314-534-3807
Stray Dog Theatre 314-531-5923
Theatre Guild of Webster Groves 314-962-0876
That Uppity Theatre Company 314-995-4600
Webster University Conservatory Hotline 314-968-7128